While my lay out in some areas is quite strong, my paragraphs and the way I structure them are not as good as I would like. I will read through high graded work in order to use the techniques used by these students in my work to change my work to a higher standard.
How: Review PEE, clearer analysing.
You would be best advised to look at your own work and try and rewrite it to meet the criteria, thinking about what else you could say to make the point subtler or more imaginative. Set yourself an actual task and a time to do it e.g. rewrite three of my paragraphs to ensure they consider APF subtly (on Thursday after colege).
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